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Tasha1	a challenge from Dorothy	Lead	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32185 (07/02/09 23:00:27) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	The challenge is: take any one one of the following book titles and write it into the opening line of your poem. Human Wishes Birthday Letters Crow Dog Language Negative Blue the poem must be no more or less than fifteen lines long. In the poem you must use the following words abbozzo= primitive sketch ablepsia= blindness lascuscular= like or pertaining to pools labret= lip ornament fabulist-= one who invents fables tachism= painting by smearing or splattering jaculiferous= having arrowlike prickles and now last but not least--- it must be a poem about being in love.
Tasha1	.	#1	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32188 (07/03/09 03:52:28) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Human Wishes: of a lover. whose touch, an abbozzo= primitive sketch of gliding lips together like satin i think the filled-in eyes, lascuscular= like or pertaining to pools and slightly defective, my own ablepsia= blindness and his horizontal nearness a tachism= painted & smeared, splattering my skin-touched parts impossibly naked. my fabulist-= one who invents fables of orange my labret= lip ornament... extended with dance my magic music, heart & shape. you jolly jaculiferous= leaving arrowlike prickles on my brain with your feather of games. Last Edited By: Tasha1 07/03/09 03:59:51. Edited 1 times.
owlcry	Negative Blue	#2	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 4167 (07/03/09 09:31:24) Sarah Wilson Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Negative Blue: Woman lurks as abbozzo= primitive sketch whittler. Surprise designs, startles innocent truths never suspected, displays passion for ablepsia= blindness of flaky, wrinkly man. Desired lascuscular= like or pertaining to pools of his bloody nub's caress, and outline labret= lip ornament on cartoon face. I stare. Long ago when the bras were found outside church by flying nuns, it was embossed in biblical senses to respect people's faults, and mystery. Second photograph reassures tachism= painting by smearing or splattering his life's dance somehow halted. Mirrored face stares back, pretty girl in profile reflects grandmother's faith, and just like ancestral fabulist-= one who invents fables, I believe one should never tell secrets - like reason he cut off his left ring finger. Third picture elevates jaculiferous= having arrowlike prickles, and color circles lips red. Similar shade matches rose bouquet he holds. Last Edited By: owlcry 07/05/09 07:01:04. Edited 3 times.
hushush8	re this	#3	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 663 (07/03/09 10:29:44) peterlord Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	I love this one. be back to post but Im a little busy right now. genevieve just arrived & wants to write something. shes in the shower now, washing & scrubbing away her night. dunno what Im gonna do bout her.
Tasha1		#4	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32194 (07/03/09 12:30:50) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	guys.. post more than one if you feel like it. u won't win anything ... but still...
Tasha1		#5	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32276 (07/04/09 23:00:35) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Owl. cut faded.
owlcry		#6	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 4174 (07/05/09 07:01:39) Sarah Wilson Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	done, will do more, girls here till tues. this is fun!
Tasha1		#7	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32299 (07/08/09 03:42:44) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	it tues, now.. :-)
Tasha1		#8	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32320 (07/08/09 22:59:10) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	my fabulist-= a poem. dear Human of games. a system of tachism= now write it in heart pools and/or book titles and lines.. eyes, Wishes & Birthday poems = my own satin the lips on must like to kiss slight fullness, labret= horizontal tachism= his one beautiful ornament = a brain primitive paintings invent arrow-like lascusculars on my mouth = jaculiferous= skin-touched into magic hip feather the opening. gliding like an abbozzo= extended Ablepsia = me to you splattering naked into The Blue
DawningDaytripper.thenewblueline	Tidal lagoon	#9	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 8 (07/10/09 10:04:31) Julie Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	The Negative blue tide lapping on my shore an abbozzo of tranquil hearts. Drowning me in the desire to mix in buckets of fabulist Ganga green, or throw out a line of amethyst ablepsia fishing for a enlightenment. The oval of a white foamy tachism dream being caught in the ebb and flow, of a labret teasing The promise of a dramatic sense of scarlet fabulist wonder. Coventry left to sort out the mix in my confused rainbow lascuscular lagoon. Still prancing around to avoid all of the jaculiferuos that accompany such shades. D.D. I think I got them all... Last Edited By: DawningDaytripper 07/10/09 10:31:12. Edited 5 times.
owlcry		#10	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 4177 (07/11/09 04:21:17) Sarah Wilson Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	I love these! Am working on today, promise, at least by afternoon. & yes, I know it's Sat. lol.
owlcry		#11	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 4178 (07/11/09 17:25:40) Sarah Wilson Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Crow I was raped before and now screwed again. Twice - if husbands count. Caw, caw, caw. Abbozzo tilts = primitive sketch whittler. Hysterics peer timid ablepsia = blindness, step inside lost time, hang opposite fabulist = ones who invents fables, and he's striped black and pink; a thin Indian blanket draws waist high. Crosshatch of soft black tips back, a lascuscular = like or pertaining to pools of black open, and I want a mirror to put beneath his nostrils. Beady eyes and caw counts three again, hunts pulse. Eagle ears slip under his plaid to listen. The gold labret = pierced lip ornament relaxes into resignation. Love worth pursuing is never forgotten. He was first in my heart; I was young, an image of his mother. Memories of black birds flapping belly sex dart tachism - painting by smearing or splattering that quickens the left behind wait-and-see heart beat. Final caws whir silence; a spirit on the run, and our love's jaculiferous = having arrowlike prickles; the scar will never heal. Screwed by death. Last Edited By: owlcry 07/12/09 11:33:09. Edited 2 times.
LetaJo	Dog language	#12	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 2372 (07/12/09 09:06:32) Christine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	i have written you countless birthday letters canvassed an abbozzo on your shoulder blade pierced you with my tongue-a diamond lascuscular been a fabulist speaking in whispers over campfires about our wish to be humans trying our hand at our first tachism, messy and colorful all the while your speach is jaculiferous and still my ear leans toward you
Tasha1	!!!!	#13	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32399 (07/14/09 23:04:19) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	good stuff, you guys!
Tasha1		#14	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32576 (08/20/09 13:22:43) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	do we need a new challenge? i do.
DawningDaytripper.thenewblueline		#15	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 43 (08/20/09 22:18:21) Julie Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	YESSS
Tasha1		#16	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 32582 (08/20/09 22:21:36) little suzy sunshine Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	go ahead and post one, Julie. start a new thread.
DawningDaytripper.thenewblueline		#17	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 44 (08/20/09 22:29:29) Julie Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	OK I will scrounge a challenge up..... I wonder what it will be?
DawningDaytripper.thenewblueline		#18	[-]
Salty Poet Posts: 46 (08/20/09 23:48:18) Julie Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Ok check it out, I maybe should make it more specific though let me know if I got close D.D.

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