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Posts: 33044 (11/03/09 15:35:43) little suzy sunshine
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Posts: 4260 (11/03/09 17:42:39) Sarah Wilson
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Bondage
The ice of the moon melts our tips, wet as a kiss, quick as bee's bite. Early light traces the slow event, whispers softness in both ears, sets us free and left in knots. |
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Posts: 4261 (11/03/09 17:44:56) Sarah Wilson
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you know i suck at short ones. lol.
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Salty Poet
Posts: 33049 (11/03/09 19:53:31) little suzy sunshine
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harder than what people think. each word counts. in a big way. starting with the title.
i may just go back to older poems and cut out their little beating hearts. thank you, sarah, for putting money in the salty kitty to rid it of those ads. 
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Posts: 4262 (11/03/09 20:17:10) Sarah Wilson
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i've sure been looking over my old ones, and boy do some of them suck!
u welcome about ads. i love this place. |
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Salty Poet
Posts: 4263 (11/03/09 20:18:44) Sarah Wilson
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u know i just thought about one i did, i want to find and see what i did. everything rhymes in it up and down, it's wierd, a challenge at college &
it's an oldie. let me hunt.
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Salty Poet
Posts: 4264 (11/03/09 20:42:15) Sarah Wilson
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hadn't found the wierd one yet, but found this one:
Cobras I love new-fashioned whores: Men swollen with sperm, who span excited skin, hover above victim, stage hood winks, ruler-sized beds, vacuum pumps, Viagra kings. |
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Salty Poet
Posts: 33050 (11/03/09 20:47:09) little suzy sunshine
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stage hood-winks ruler-sized beds vacuum pumps Viagra kings .... |
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Salty Poet
Posts: 143 (11/03/09 21:25:07) Dan the Music Man
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lol sarah
erections lasting for four hours! time seems much, much more about a half-past seven, purple pills |
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Salty Poet
Posts: 33051 (11/03/09 21:34:29) little suzy sunshine
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true, that.
and i hate to admit it but i feel old always giving to/for another. |
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what the fuck am i saying | ||
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Salty Poet
Posts: 33052 (11/03/09 21:36:15) little suzy sunshine
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i am old.
end of story. lol listening to my jethro jull and drinking. |
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Salty Poet
Posts: 4265 (11/03/09 23:40:50) Sarah Wilson
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well both sound fun to me. haha
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Posts: 94 (11/10/09 22:28:28) Hoppa
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Real sin
Can get one A Lethal injection. |
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smalls | ||
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Salty Poet
Posts: 85 (11/11/09 22:19:45) Rae
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I love your short poems Sarah.
I don't do many short poems. I have these, but I'm not sure if they're really short poems or just ideas that I never thought of any way to develop. Anyway: Falls The light falls like water your hair is drenched with it Thinking about it All endings are dead when you think about it Ring Seamless script burns in fire around your finger the legend of my love |
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Posts: 30 (11/12/09 01:02:25) Lori
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I fear,my dear
that one must know when it's time to go, yo |
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Posts: 97 (11/12/09 12:43:47) Hoppa
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i'd've rather just been told not lied to bad. urgent bent over back to get
brian to work in ur brown sweat pants and not even a dirty thong did u put on and left early when the time changed judging deliberately by the kitchen clock to
steal some precious moments rockin in the car before they was pickin him up to take him off to work.
if u don't like it when u find ur gettin treated like a slut ya ought not act like one,,,
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